First place

Ida Jia, “The Earth in Winter”

Dana Hall School

Julia Bucci and Mary Ann McQuillan, advisers

Judge’s comments: “The Earth in Winter” by Ida creates vivid imagery and thoughtful metaphors through well-chosen diction that force the reader to feel the heartbreak families face when they are forced to do what is necessary to support each other, whether that is working in far away places or caring for our deteriorating elders.

Second place

Jin (Maggie) Zhang, “The Bloom in the Crib”

Dana Hall School

Julia Bucci and Mary Ann McQuillan, advisers

Third place

Ahmed Abdi, “Tell Me Who’s Next”

The 8 Wonders, Boston International School

Nicole Da Silva, adviser